Monday, December 19, 2005

One Moment's Distance

I could see her in the distance,
Looking at me, not moving one step;
I watched her... not waving,
Nor smiling, nor calling to her...
Silently yearning to touch her,
I remained where I was;
I guess, even in my dream, I knew
It'd take me years to cross
One moment's distance

4 comments:

zebee said...

Thanks :)

Nandi23 said...

question, the 'she ' in the poem, does it refer to the 'self'

zebee said...

it's not what i had in mind, but i'm always interested in hearing about new interpretations :) that's the part i enjoy the most about my poems! reaching the true self - that's a great new perspective!

zebee said...

the first thing most people think of is their love.... especially guys ;) but that's not what i had in mind either :) or maybe i did... just a little ;) because i knew that's the most obvious interpretation :)